My name is Sandra. In this blog I will be  describing the feedback I received from my peer review paper. Nazeen  said she loved the paper and how detailed it was but, I should include more of my personality into the paper. She suggested I add more detail from the book and maybe include a quotation sandwich. Sanjida notice that I repeated some details. I plan on taking their advice and adding or deleting information they thought would help my paper. My biggest concern about the paper would be being unable to incorporate everything I have to, to get an A paper. I think the teacher was pretty clear on what to do. I just need to be more sure of myself.